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You mess up the scale lad, helo is too oblate.

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Yes, specially in the engine compartment, but when I tried to draw this part more tall, he looked too tall. I will try to redesingn this part, because he look too much like a JetRanger engine compartment

Is now better? I changed the engine compartment and added some details that I forgot

One thing is that so far it has no shading and therefore looks "flat".
Another is that many supposedly straight lines (in real life) here arent - it's visible particularly (but not only) on vertical elements of tail, bottom contour of tail and especially on windows.

Ok, now I hope that's everything is ok, I think that I posted too many times the same draw in this thread (is this a problem?)

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[Edit.1] Well, I followed the drawing of Imperialist and I hope that's now ok
[Edit.2] Made the corrections suggested by Eswube

Welcome aboard on Shipbucket danricco!
I hope this helps:

I tried to show appropriate shading, although I'm not very familiar with helicopters. In addition I've also included the shading that I use on the bottom right hand corner for blanks.
~Imperialist
P.S: You can always go back an edit a post so you are not reposting the same image multiple times in a thread, just leave a little edit remark

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Lad, you mistake shadows, you put the dark one on the helo and below. The upper one (in Imperialist pic the color yellow) is not shadow but the lighter side.

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Many thanks, Imperialist! Helped a lot!

I tried to redesign the exaust tube, but I can't do any better then the original, so, I only changed the color to darker ones.
I changed all de shades of grey in the chopper, with the main one in a more darker shade and I correct one thing or two in the rotor

@Danricco
Here are few most obvious things I would change. (those in red and green)
You don't have too - that's just a suggestion, but I think not a bad one.