I know I keep harping on it, but your director placement is awkward at best and you still don't have enough of them.
The red arrows are where I'd put the directors, the orange ones are an alternative. The green arrow is where I'd move the 40mm guns. I'd move the aft three mounting battery further aft since right no I think the island is going to restrict the firing arcs too much.
The drawing floating around in the middle is a rough sketch of how I'd place the directors on the island. You might consider putting a gallery there as well.
I'm not certain about this, but I'm not sure you can mount the aft HACS on such a small platform.
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