Hmmm ... I like it, very nice lines. But 3xPhalanx, a little overpower ?
Read! "It's like calling a woman the ugliest girl in the entire universe, before you have seen her!" (well I am trying not to go totally out on you with my mad Humor!)
EDIT: Forgot to remove the forward CIWS. Pretend they're not there. For now. oops Next time I update them, I'll have them gone.